SUBJECT: Introduction Letter
Dear Mdm Faz,
My name is Renee and I would like to introduce myself to you. I am currently a Year 1 student in Singapore Institute of Technology studying Mechanical Engineering.
The reason that I chose this degree was due to my creative nature. Since we are in a time of rapid social and technological changes, I have to think creatively to challenge myself.
My communication strengths would be being a good listener. This is also the reason that differentiates me from other students. I will listen with an open mind and empathize with people. The ability to listen will allow me to accurately receive and interpret messages.
However, I tend to be overly critical of my own work. I strive to aim for perfection which has caused me stress and inability to do my best. Creativity has no limits, therefore I am working on acknowledging my achievements and to venture outside of my comfort zone.
At the end of this module, I hope to gain a deeper understanding on the ways to communicate with people of different cultures, age and background. I would also like to learn how to deliver my thoughts well so others can easily comprehend my words.
I hope this email finds you well and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
Renee Tan
Hi Renee,
ReplyDeleteYour letter is well written, points were short and concise. Perhaps adding some personal experiences to support your points will make your message more relatable to audience reading about you. In all, your did a great job in writing the letter of introduction with great vocabulary used.
Great to know more about you, hope that we have a chance work together in the future.
Hi Renee,
ReplyDeleteThe email was well-written. Firstly, your subject is short and clear. The greeting was polite and formal. Secondly, the email body is short and straightforward. I definitely know you better by knowing your vision and ambition. Lastly, you closed up the email with courtesy by showing gratitude and seek replies from the reader enthusiastically. Overall, the explanations were concise and the email was easy to scan through.
Cheers,
Zhuo Yi